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今天小编在这给大家整理了雅思写作分类范文,本文共19篇,我们一起来阅读吧!

篇1:雅思写作分类词汇

Animals

inhumane adj. 残酷的, 不人道的

biodiversity n. 生物多样性

companion n. 伙伴

replacement n. 替代物

habitat n. 栖息地

endangered species 濒危物种

篇2:雅思写作分类词汇

Environment

exploit natural resources 开采自然资源

ecosystem 生态系统

. profound impact 深远影响

. conserve v. 保护, 保存

discharge v. 排放

sustainable development 可持续发展

recycle v. 再利用

contamination n. 污染

. consume v. 消耗

environmentally friendly 环保的

篇3:雅思写作分类词汇

Society

the pace of life 生活节奏

. the gap between the urban area and the rural area 城乡差距

eliminate v. 消除

facilities n. 设施

alienated adj. 疏远的

materialistic adj. 物质化的, 现实的

the present situation 现状

篇4:雅思写作复杂句分类

与前面两类从句相比,宾语从句在雅思写作中的使用频率相对较小。事实上,宾语从句可用于写提出或总述自己观点的句子。以下面这个句子为例。

例6: A growing number of parents believe that being overly dependent on social networking websites only makes their children more isolated in the real world.

点评:这个句子就是通过宾语从句来阐述作者的观点,即“过分依赖社交网络只会让自己的孩子在现实中更加孤独”。

雅思写作范文:入乡随俗与多元文化

Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Other people disagree that the host country should welcome culture diversity. To what extend do you agree?

Identifying the foreign customs is a difficult task for any visitors. Cultural conflicts may occur when one does not know much about the strange social codes other than his own country. In reality, people’s opinion about whether the host country should encourage cultural differences or to what degree should they accept the alien cultures as they may cause annoyance to them. In my opinion, I insist that the local customs should be highly respected in many occasions but not necessarily be followed blindly.

The primary concern is given to the significance of one’s national traditions and heritage that has been passed down. It is important because all these customs has undergone thousands of years of practice and become the treasure of a nation. For instance, the eating tradition in many areas and regions such as people eat red eggs when they have a new baby, eating jiaozi—a kind of Chinese dumpling when we celebrate Chinese lunar year, and still eating when someone’s grandpa passed away. This might be a blunt for many visitors who first come here. Visitors in such a situation may choose to practice as if he were a local or he may just see and enjoy the atmosphere.

Even if visitors keep a stance away from the traditions of a foreign country, they should not be hostile to them. The reason is simple. If the visitors refuse to take the fact that the local customs may offend their faith or something they believe, and even they are disheartening, they will possibly act improperly under such situation. Take eating out custom as example, Chinese people when eating out, there are always a person who masters the table and even pays the bill. This might be offensive to a foreign who does not get used to this manner. But as we Chinese people say” Ru Xiang Sui Su” literally means that one should get used to the local customs when visiting it, this is a reflection of what we discuss here about the culture diversity.

In general, one should see how he knows about the cultures and how he should react upon it. There are no fixed rules to be followed. What seems important is “when in Rome; do as the Romans do” philosophy applies to many situations when one feel uncertain about the host culture.

雅思写作范文:因材施教还是统一教学

Some people think that teaching children of different abilities together benefits everyone. others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment.

Discuss both sides of view and give you own opinion

Education is playing an important role in our world and becoming a vital task for 21 century. undoubtedly, parents are paying moire and more attention to it so that they come up with a variety of methods. some people hold that children with different abilities and gifts should be educated together, while others think that it is better to separate intelligent children from the average, provided with special treatment.

As first option is concerned, that teaching children together is the most common used way in schools. children have the equal right to be inculcated in school, regardless of age and sex. they should be ingesting knowledge from teachers with same status and sharing the facilities equipped by schools. moreover, different children own distinct gifts and abilities, which makes them distinguished from each other. by communicating with classmates and friends around these children, they are more likely to complement each other. in other words, they could learn from or be influenced by other children. just because of the diversity, the children have much more knowledge and novel thoughts to absorb from their peers. definitely, teaching children of different abilities together benefits everyone.

By contrast, how about these intelligent children separated from others? they could not get more opportunities to make new friends and be confined in such a narrow scope, either mentally or physically. in china, there are several special schools or classes sponsored by famous universities, called: juvenile class, which means they just enrol intelligent children with very high iq. most of these children are very young but accepting overwhelming study burden. they do not study with the same age children, yet separately. they are in spotlight, and become the focus of society with high expectation. however, not all of them could be successful in the future, even some children get serious psychological problems under such pressure. they lose the rights of sharing happiness they should have.

Then, to be a successful person, s/he should be an ordinary person first. if the children are deprived of spending time with their friends and classmates, they will lose happiness. then, they could not grow up normally and healthily. in my opinion, children should not be separated but study together.

雅思写作范文:因材施教还是统一教学(2)

题目:

Some people think that teaching children of different abilities together benefits everyone. others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment.discuss both sides of view and give you own opinion

分析:

在写作的时候一定注意审题,在考试时最好把最后一句划上,即:discuss both sides of view and give you own opinion 。其实,这句话已经告诉你了文章的结构,

导入:背景铺垫,引出话题。

主体:

一段 Some people think that teaching children of different abilities together benefits everyone.

二段 Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment

结尾:

提出自己的观点,总结全文。

(法无定法,此结构仅供参考)

例文

In one class, a variety of students can be found, with different knowledge bases, study habits as well as intelligence, posing certain barriers for studying, esp. the influence to smarter students, who are far more demanding in teaching progress and content, is concerned.

One opinion is that an ideal method to solve the problem might be to separate the more intelligent students from the rest and be nurtured individually. in this case, the reorganized students, who are much quicker to master what they learned, will enjoy their owe lessons conduction scheme, programmed accordingly. simultaneously, their knowledge-thirsty intention will be catered for. however, such drawbacks as isolation amongst students will occur, and, psychologically speaking, the rest are greatly discouraged; their study morale will be seriously undermined. further more, it is unlikely that a great number of extinguished students do exist.

Some people are strongly against such separation, but for integration teaching. everyone is endowed with their own merits in various aspects, which can be beneficial for others to overcome shortcomings and better themselves. studying in school not only serves academic purpose, but also learn how to balance their developments in both mentality and physicality. to learn how to behave in different occasions, for example, how to handle interpersonal relations and so forth. we can not blink the fact that there are still some flaws refected from the students with high intelligence, for instance, embarrassed in communication, dull in extra-curricular activities, being isolated from others, etc. undoubtedly weakening their future competition ability.

I do prefer that all the students with different intelligent should share the same teaching environment. thus the intelligent students alone with others will be more competitive in their coming careers with comprehensive capabilities learned from one another.

篇5:雅思写作复杂句分类

定语从句是雅思写作的复杂句中使用频率最高的复杂句。对于写作定语从句,考生要学会使用多种引导词,不仅要学会用which和that这样常见的引导词,也要学会用其他引导词。归纳起来,定语从句最常见的引导词包括以下八个:表示人的who、whom和whose,表示物的which,既可以表示物又可以表示人的that,表示地点的where,表示时间的when以及表示原因的why。在此,笔者主要向考生介绍一下既好用又实用的表达原因的由why 引导的定语从句。

众所周知,大作文中很多话题都会要求考生对事件的原因进行分析。考生最容易用because引导的原因状语从句来表达,事实上考生还可以使用why引导的定语从句来阐述原因,此时why前面的先行词必须是the reason。我们可以将之归纳成以下这个句型:

One of the (most) significant reasons why +描述现象的句子+ is +归纳原因的名词性短语

我们来看一个例句。

例4: One of the most significant reasons why wild animals are facing the possibility of extinction is the increased influence of human activities.

点评:在本句中,why后面的句子wild animals are facing the possibility of extinction是对话题现象的描述,而the increased influence of human activities是归纳原因的名词性短语。这个句型既可以用在段落中间,也可以用在段首点明段落的中心意思。

篇6:雅思写作复杂句分类

状语从句种类繁多,在雅思写作中最常用的有五类:时间状语从句、原因状语从句、条件状语从句、目的状语从句和让步状语从句。考生如果掌握了以上几种状语从句,那么要做到作文的句型结构多样性这一点就很简单了。事实上,写状语从句并不难,考生只要总结和记住各类状语从句的引导词就能轻松突破了,同时要根据主从句的关系正确使用引导词。下面列举几个状语从句供考生参考。

例5: ① The related sectors should take effective measures the moment the problem appeared.

② As education is particularly significant for the growth of the children, every parent in China is making efforts to acquire the highest teaching quality for kids.

③ Providing that social violence is eliminated completely, every citizen can be able to live in peace and harmony.

点评:句①是由the moment引导的时间状语从句,句②是as引导的原因状语从句,句③是由providing that (相当于if)引导的条件状语从句。这三个句子通过引导词将两个简单句连接成为复杂句,句子的结构更加多样,句子的逻辑结构也很清晰,为写作增加了很多亮点。

篇7:雅思写作大作文话题分类

一、教育类

A 理论与实践

1 知识和经验的重要性

2 为什么要上大学

3 大学理论和实践课程的关系

4 成功人士所需素质是不是必须从大学或相似的科研学术机构中学习

5 高中毕业的学生是否应该在去大学前要工作或旅游一年

6 高中生评估和挑战老师,会不会没有尊重没有纪律性

B 男女生问题

7 大学专业招收的学生男女比例是否应该协调

8 男女分校的利弊

篇8:雅思写作大作文话题分类

五、青少年类

1 学生变异行为或态度的原因和改善

2 家庭小孩的惩罚教育是否有效

3 学生压力是否很大

4 父母是否应该限制小孩看电视玩游戏,应该看书学习

5 儿童的性格来自先天还是后天培养

6 儿童要学会竞争还是合作

7 课余参加有偿劳动是否提倡

篇9:雅思写作大作文话题分类

六、老年人类

1 我们这一辈人和上辈人区别的重要方式

2 公司55岁的老人是否应该退休让位给年青人

3 年青人比老年人社会地位高的原因和改善

七、科技与传统类

1 电脑电视录相等是否替代书籍成为传媒和教育的工具

2 电脑的普及是否会取代老师的教育

3 建立博物馆的目的和手段

4 网络的普及影响到生活中家庭成员或是朋友之间的亲密关系

5 科学技术的发展有多大的潜在危机

6 技术发展是否影响娱乐习惯和减少创造力

7 生命工程中的器官移植和试管婴儿等是否不人道

篇10:雅思写作大作文话题分类

二、体育活动类

1 学生花时间练习体育运动的利与弊/该不该。

2 体育活动造成竞争而非合作是否应该提倡

3 体育盛事是否有利于缓解世界紧张局势,维护世界和平

三、语言类

1 如何说服他人学习自己母语

2 英语流行的利弊

3 英语和国际旅游业的流行会不会导致小语种和小民族的伤害

4 机器翻译的推进是否导致不必学外语

四、新闻广告类

1 人们是否只应阅读真实事件或人物

2 是否新闻的真实性和好的工作者的素质

3 广告的利弊

篇11:雅思写作大作文话题分类

八、金钱类

1 人类登月类似研究浪费金钱和时间么

2 医生应以救人为主,不论病人之贫和利益

3 向朋友借钱会否影响友谊及其原因。

4 花钱买东西或用东西交换的各自好处,你喜欢哪种?

5 体育专业是否应该拿钱比其它重要的专业多

九、国家政府类

1 政府是否应该重视传统和艺术

2 发展中国家是应该致力于发展本国的科技研究还是发展人文教育

3 政府花钱在艺术上还是其他事情上

4 政府财政支持在科学上还是语言商业上

5 你的国家城乡差距大的原因和解决

6 电影教给你其他国家的哪些概况

7 富国是否应该帮助穷国

8 你的国家和其他地方有何相似,如何相似

10 政府是否该为母亲工作提供帮助和资源

11 国外工作一段时期对个人和国家有何影响

篇12:雅思写作分类之政府类

【政府类】

Some people believe that the healthcare should be free for everyone,while others say that people should pay for their own health care. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 有人认为健康医疗对于每一个公民应该免费,有人认为个人应该承担医疗费用,讨论两种观点,给出你的意见。

【老师预测——原题压中,见前预测】

【政府类】

Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss the two opinions and give your views. 有人认为政府应该给公民的教育和医疗买单,有人认为这不是政府的责任,讨论两种观点,说明你的立场?

【作家立场】我认为,享受免费的医疗是公民的一项基本权利。同时,政府应该合理地分配医疗预算。

【思路拓展】

〖政府给医疗买单的理由〗

① 公民是纳税人,有享受免费医疗的权利。政府是人民利益的代表,普及免费医疗可以还利于民。

② 政府的医疗上的援助可以使得很多患病的,同时来自贫困家庭的人得到及时的治疗,这有助于提高政府的威信,以及增强民众的民族自豪感。

③ 普及免费医疗可以公民的健康指数,因此提高国民的基本素质,增强一个国家在国际舞台的竞争力。

〖反对政府给医疗买单的理由〗

① 政府的财政有限,但是,要解决的民生问题是无穷的,完全普及免费医疗会无疑增加政府的财政压力。

② 对比普及免费的医疗,政府还要解决更重要的民生问题,例如改善环境,加强基础设施建设,普及教育,这些更加需要政府经济援助。

【范文赏析】

【首段】 背景介绍 + 作家立场

The government, as a decision-maker, is the representative of citizen’s basic interests. Hence, every governmental policy willsurely exert a profound influence on the further prosperity of the nation. From my perspective,people have a basic right to free heath-care as a necessary condition of a proper human life. However,properly allocate the medical budget should be advocated.

【二段】正方观点的展开

Virtually,every individual could become beneficiaries of a perfect health-care resources. First, as honorable tax-payer, every citizen has been making his or her unique contribution to the nation. Thereby, to spend money on free healthcare should be considered as a returned favor. Also, as for those who are living under the poverty line and suffering from the agonies of various diseases, they might even fail to afford a small proportion of their medical care expenses. Therefore, the government should be urged to sponsor those who are in need of medical help. Imaginably, it could stabilize the society and enhance the government’s prestige. Eventually, to provide citizens with free medical care could, to a large extent, promote citizens’ health index and thusimprove the basic quality of a nation’s population.

【三段】反方观点的展开

Others, however, might think differently. First, some opponents argue that ever-rising heath costs were matched against static or declining resources. In this sense, excessive investment medical treatment will inevitably impose much pressure upon a government economically. Another argument hold by some people is that the government has more pressing social problems that need to render more concerns over. In other words, to popularize free education, perfect the construction of the infrastructure or safeguard the environment still needs governmental support.

【尾段】再次亮明观点

In closing, my stand is that health-care should be considered as one of the fundamental social welfare. Therefore, it is the unshakable obligation to every government to ensure that adequate healthcare is provided out of public purse.

【经典语料】

1. medical treatment = healthcare = medical care 医疗

2. spend money on = make investment in = allocate financial budget to sth 投资于……

3. surely exert a profound influence on 对于……产生深远的影响

4. From my perspective, people have a basic right to free heath-care as a necessary condition of a proper human life. 我认为,享受免费的医疗是公民的一项基本权利。

5. properly allocate the medical budget should be advocated 合理分配医疗预算应该被提倡

6. to spend money on free healthcare should be considered as a returned favor. 普及免费医疗是还利于民

7. Therefore, the government should be urged to do sth 政府理应做……

8. Virtually,every individual could become beneficiaries of a sound healthcare. 实际上,任何人都可以成为完备医疗的受益者。

9. stabilize the society and enhance the government’s prestige 稳定社会,提高政府的威信力

10. promote citizens’ health index and thus improve the basic quality of a nation’s population 提高公民健康指数,因此提高一个国家公民的基本素质

11. health-care should be considered as one of the fundamental social welfare 医疗应该被当作是一项基本的社会福利

12. enable those who suffering from various illnesses to receive fine therapy 使患者接受良好的治疗

13. ever-rising heath costs were matched against static or declining resources. 日益增加的健康费用和有限的下降的资源是矛盾

14. impose much pressure on the government economically 给政府增加了经济压力

15. the government has more pressing social problems that need to render more concerns over 政府有有更紧迫社会问题要优先考虑

16. popularize free education and perfect the construction of the infrastructure普及免费的教育和完善基础设施

17. Therefore, it is the unshakable obligation to every government to ensure that……因此,政府保障……是其不可推卸的责任

18. adequate healthcare is provided out of public purse 由公共财政预算提供充足的医疗

雅思大作文范文:政府是否应该限制极限运动

【政府类】

Some people think the government should ban dangerous sports and some others think it is a freedom to choose the activities we want to. Discuss both view and give your opinion. 有人认为政府应该限制危险性的运动,有人认为人人有权利选择自己喜爱的运动。讨论两种观点,给出你的意见。(7月30日 = 8月9日)

【头脑风暴导言】

通常,令我们敬重和欣赏之人皆有共性:第一,他们做了我们渴望做,但是,却未敢尝试的事情。第二,他们成功地做成了我们尝试未果的事情。深海潜水,让人探究神秘的海底世界;勇攀高峰,让人体味一览众山小的豪情;海上帆板,让人感受劈风斩浪的激情。探索未知是人之本性,挑战自我是人之追求。完善自我保护,加强专业训练,若如此,人人都应尝试一些极限运动。

【作家立场】 人生没有冒险就不能称其为人生(支持极限运动)。

【文章布局】:

首段:背景介绍 + 作家立场

二段:正方观点的展开(我的口吻谈及极限运动的利好)

三段:反方观点的展开(我的口吻谈及极限运动的弊端)

尾段:再次亮明观点 + 提出建议

【老师语料库】

① 极限运动危险运动的类型:

1. bungee jumping n蹦极

2. paragliding n跳伞

3. surfing n海上冲浪

4. scuba-diving = deep sea diving n 深海潜水

5. rock climbing n攀岩

② 极限运动之多元表达:

1. run the risk of doing sth v冒险做……

2. dangerous sports activities n危险性体育运动

3. challenging sports events n充满挑战性的竞技体育

4. extreme adventures n极限运动

5. extreme sports n极限运动

③ 支持极限运动:

1. forge one’s fortitude v铸造人的坚韧性

2. chasten one’s tenacity v 磨练人的顽强

3. foster one’s frustration toleration v培养人的挫折忍受能力

4. If they are banned,then many sports would go underground. 如果被限制,很多体育项目会消失。

5. surpass oneself v 超越自我

④ 反对极限运动:

1. suffer from injuries or even deaths v 遭遇伤害甚至死亡

2. become an excuse for violence v成为暴力的借口

⑤ 作家立场:

1. Greater attempts should be made to prevent accidents or injuries v 我们应该做出努力预防以外事故和伤害

2. ensure sports are challenging, exciting and amusing v 确保运动是充满挑战,令人兴奋,使人愉快的。

【原创范文】:

{首段}:背景介绍 + 作家立场

Such is human nature to explore the unknown. A trend is that numerous people are keen on embarking on challenging sports events such as mountain biking, rock climbing or scuba diving , especially among those dynamic young adults. My stand is that we should pursue excitement and sense of refreshment in the dull routine daily life. After all, life without risk is no life at all.

【解析】:Life without risk is no life at all 人生没有冒险就不能称其为人生。

{二段}:正方观点的展开:

Granted, many virtues could be gained via undertaking those risky sports activities. Primarily, the extreme adventures can be taken as an effective way to help players relieve their pressure and vent their negative emotions, for the occupied modern life often deprives one’s right of seeking relaxation. The popularity of bungee jumping accounts for risky sports’ significant function in terms of reducing stress. Imaginably, one’s working efficiency could be highly enhanced after doing his or her favorite sports events. Moreover, not only can the extreme adventures exert wholesome impacts , but it also could foster one’s skills, chasten one’s tenacity and forge one’s frustration toleration. Some extreme adventures, such as rock climbing and surfing, requires high techniques or much stamina . Ultimately, the extreme adventures could be developed into tempting tourism items, which could generate immense economic value.

【解析】:

1.The extreme adventures can be taken as an effective way to help players relieve their pressure and vent their negative emotions. 极限运动是一种很好的方式去帮助运动者缓解压力,释放不良情绪。

2. It also could foster one’s skills, chasten one’s tenacity and forge one’s frustration toleration. 极限运动同意可以培养人的技能,磨练人的坚韧,铸造人的挫折忍受能力。

{三段}:反方观点的展开:

Nonetheless, problems invariably ensue. One possible downside is that some perilous sports activities might become the roots of injuries and agonies. There exist high levels of injuries, which sometimes disables players and even ruins their lives. Another adverse aspect is that some intense extreme sports are merely an excuse for violence. To illustrate, boxing involves excessive violence and bloody contents so that it adversely influences adolescent Television viewers, namely, it might arouse their sadistic impulses.

【解析】:

1. Some intense extreme sports are merely an excuse for violence. 一些极限运动也许会成为暴力的借口。

2. It might arouse their sadistic impulses. 极限运动也许会诱发一个人施虐的冲动。

{尾段}:再次亮明观点 + 提出建议

Personally, I encourage the extreme adventures, for it symbolizes freedom, so it is citizens’ elementary right to opt for his or her favorite sports activities. Attempts should be made to ensure risky sports events are thrilling, amusing and profit-making, however, to prevent accidents and injuries is highly recommended(328)

【解析】:

Attempts should be made to ensure risky sports events are thrilling, amusing and profit-making. 我们应该做出努力去保证极限运动是刺激的、有趣的、盈利的。

雅思大作文范文:政府是否应征收高峰期通行费

【政府类】政府是否应征收高峰期通行费

In some cities, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative? 在一些城市,政府试图缓解交通压力,例如,征收高峰期通行费,你认为有力还是有弊?(1月30日)

【考情点评】本场考试雅思选取托福题库,该题在托福考试中连续两年考察。

Drivers should pay a certain amount of fees so that they can be permitted to drive out in traffic busy time. Do you agree or disagree the statement? (7月12日 = 1月14日)

【头脑风暴】新加坡在1975年引入了交通阻碍费,随后,很多国家也效仿其做法。统计显示:此类费用可使交通量减少10%—20%,同时,可以将车流速度提高20%。

【作家立场】 我支持司机们应当支付一定的费用,取得“城市高峰通行许可证”,才能在高峰期间上路。

【思路拓展】

司机付费的利好:

① 这种做法可以有效地缓解交通拥堵的压力,同时,这可以有效地缓解空气污染和噪音污染。

② 这种做法可以节省职场人士上下班的交通时间。

司机付费的弊端:

① 即使是每天付少量费用,也会增加司机经济的压力,但是,我想反驳的是:等候的时间的油料消耗可能比支付的交通通行费更高。

【范文赏析】

【首段】背景介绍 + 作家立场

Going through the rush hours is a tiresome business. The prevalence of various public transport has led to severe traffic congestion,especially during the rush hours. Being stuck in the long queues of vehicles seems to be a big headache for many city dwellers. Personally speaking, it is about time governments adopted effective measures, drivers should be charged when they need to drive out in a heavy traffic, which will exert a really positive impact on reducing the serious traffic conditions.

【二段】 第一次支持作家立场

For a start, paying some permission fees could decrease the incidence of going through the busy traffic. To be more specific, some drivers would be unwilling to drive their cars in order to save money when they have no urgent things. Hence,this will mitigate the pressure of heavy traffic congestion. Further, the decreasing number of cars will also purify the air and reduce the noise. As a result, the living quality of the whole city will be greatly optimized, citizens will enjoy a cleaner environment.

【三段】 第二次支持作家立场

This debate reminds me of my own city. Our city government has fewer policies in terms of tackling the pressure of traffic congestion, which negatively influences people’s normal work. The large amount of release of exhaust gas has deteriorated the environment. Even worse, long time wait will ruin the drivers’ moods. Consequently, some people might fail to happily perform their working tasks when they arrive at the workplace. By contrast, the fee from drivers increases the governmental income so that more financial budget could be allocated to perfecting the traffic conditions. Specifically, the government could build more over-bridges to reduce the pressure of traffic jam.

【四段】 让步向司机收费的弊端 + 加以反驳

Granted, I have to concede that this policy might impose much pressure upon the drivers economically. If they pay even limited amount of money every day, then there will be large sums of money as a whole. What I want to rebut, however, is that in time of a traffic jam, the oil consumption is much more than that of driving a slowly moving car. The cost of gasoline may be even expensive than the counterpart people pay for driving permission.

【尾段】 再次亮明观点

In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that it is worthwhile to ask for driving permission fees when the traffic is busy.

【经典语料】

1. is a tiresome business 是一件很让人心烦的事情

2. the prevalence of various public transport 各种公共交通工具的普及

3. serious traffic congestion = severe traffic jam = a heavy traffic 严重的交通拥堵

4. driving permission 交通通行费

5. should be charged 应该被收费

6. the rush hours 上下班的高峰期

7. drive through 乘车穿过

8. impose much pressure upon the drivers economically 增加了司机的经济压力

9. exert a really positive impact on 对于……施加利好的影响

10. decrease the incidence of 减少……发生的机率

11. mitigate the pressure of heavy traffic congestion 缓解交通拥堵的压力

12. release of exhaust gas 废气的释放

13. ruin the drivers’ moods 使司机的心情变坏

14. Charging traffic jam fees will definitely help ease the pressure of heavy traffic. 收取交通阻碍费一定可以帮助缓解交通的压力。

15. During the busy traffic time,it is a wise attempt to encourage drivers to pay a certain amount of fees to perfect current traffic conditions. 为改善当前的交通状况,在交通高峰时段,向司机收取一定的费用是明智的尝试。

雅思大作文范文:公民纳税

公民纳税:

Someone believes that a tax-payer has done his part as a citizen. However, someone believes that a citizen should assume other responsibilities. Discuss both views and present your opinion. 有人认为纳税者就已经尽到了公民责任,有认为认为公民应该承担其他责任,讨论两种观点?(10月30日)

老师思路拓展:

支持公民纳税:

1. 公民纳税是自我价值的实现以及对社会的贡献。

2. 更多的财政预算可以用来提供给公民更好的社会福利,例如,推广免费的教育和医疗,以及加强基础设施的建设。

支持公民的其他责任:

1. 在必要时候去服兵役以保卫祖国,体现的是一个人的爱国情怀。

2. 遵纪守法

3. 良好的环保意识,保护环境人人有责。

老师原创语料库:

1. good citizens = highly qualified citizens = excellent citizens = well-behaved citizens n 好公民

2. honorable tax-payer n光荣的纳税人

3. increase governmental income v 增加政府收入

4. multiply the governmental revenue增加政府税收

5. …… is the embodiment of the realization of self-value and the donation to the community …… 是自我价值的实现以及对社会的贡献

6. It is the unshakable / compelling / compulsory duty of every citizen to pay taxes纳税是每个公民不可推卸的义务。

7. More financial budget could be allocated to provide citizens with more beneficial social welfare such as popularizing free education and medical treatment or strengthening the constructions of infrastructure. 更多的财政预算可以用来提供给公民更好的社会福利,例如,推广免费的教育和医疗,以及加强基础设施的建设。

8. have other indispensable responsibilities to play v 还有其他不可推卸的责任

9. serve other more far-reaching social functions 履行其他的意义深远的社会职能。

10. strengthen /intensify / reinforce one’s environmental protection awareness v 加强环保意识

11. reinforce one’s law-abiding / lawful awareness v 加强守法意识

12. patriotism n.爱国心,爱国精神

13. embark on military service to safeguard one’s motherland when necessary v 在必要时候去服兵役以保卫祖国

14. abide by the law = observe the law v 守法

15. Ideal citizens should both perfectly act as the role of tax-payers and willingly serve other more profound social functions such as undertaking military service, strengthening one’s lawful and eco-friendly awareness. 理想的社会公民不仅仅是光荣的纳税者,还应该履行其他社会职能,例如服兵役,加强环保和守法意识。

篇13:雅思大小作文写作题型分类

流程图

地图题

饼图

曲线图

混合图

柱状图

表格图

雅思大作文6大题型(按文章逻辑分)

1.for&against,或者是advantage&disadvantage

支持反对类型/有点缺点类型

2.discussion

讨论型

3.to what extent do you agree or disagree

你对某观点的赞成/反对程度

4.cause&effect

问题产生原因和影响

5.problem&solution

问题说明和解决方案

6.compare&contrast

两种观点比较

雅思大作文12大题型(按文章主题分)

一、教育类

A.理论与实践

1.知识和经验的重要性。

2.为什么要上大学。

3.大学理论知识和实践课程的关系。

4.高中毕业的学生是否应该在去大学前要工作或旅游一年

5.高中生评估和挑战老师,会不会没有尊重没有纪律性。

6.成功人士所需素质是不是必须从大学或相似的科研学术机构中去学习。

B.男女生问题

7.大学专业招收的学生男女比例是否应该协调。

8.男女分校的利弊。

二、体育活动类:

1.学生花时间练习体育运动的利与弊/该不该。

2.体育活动造成竞争而非合作的是否应该提倡。

3.体育盛事是否有利于缓解世界紧张局势可以维护世界和平。

三、语言类

1.如何说服他人学习自己母语。

2.英语流行的利弊。

3.机器翻译的发展是否导致不必学外语。

4.英语和国际旅游业的流行会不会导致小语种和小民族的伤害。

四、新闻广告类

1.人们是否只应阅读真实事件或人物。

2.新闻的真实性和好的工作者的素质有关系吗。

3.广告的利与弊。

五、青少年成长类

1.学生变异行为或态度的原因和改善。

2.家庭小孩的惩罚教育是否有效。

3.学生压力是否很大。

4.父母是否应该限制小孩看电视玩游戏而应该看书学习。

5.儿童的性格来自先天还是后天培养。

6 儿童要学会竞争还是学习合作。

7 课余参加有偿劳动是否可以提倡。

六、老年人类

1.我们这一辈人和上辈人区别的重要方式。

2.公司55岁的老人是否应该退休把位置让给年青人。

3.年青人比老年人社会地位高的原因和怎么改善。

七、科技与传统类

1.电脑电视录相等是否替代书籍成为传媒和教育的工具。

2.电脑的普及是否会取代老师的对学生的教育。

3.建立博物馆的目的和手段有哪些。

4.网络的普及影响到生活中家庭成员或是朋友之间的亲密关系。

5.科学技术的发展有多少潜在的危机呢。

6.技术发展是否影响娱乐习惯从而减少创造力。

7 生命工程中的器官移植和试管婴儿等是否符合人道。

八、金钱类

1.人类登月类似研究浪费金钱和时间么。

2.医生应以救人为主,不论病人之贫和利益。

3.向朋友借钱会否影响友谊及其原因。

4.花钱买东西或用东西交换的各自好处你喜欢哪种?

5.体育专业的费用是否应该应该比其它重要专业的费用多。

九、国家政府类

1.政府是否应该重视传统和艺术。

2.发展中国家是应该致力于发展本国的科技研究还是去发展人文教育呢。

3.政府花钱在艺术上还是其他事情上。

4.政府财政支持在科学上还是语言商业上。

5.你的国家城乡差距大的原因和解决。

6.电影教给你其他国家的哪些概况

7.富国是否应该帮助穷国。

8.你的国家和其他地方有何相似,如何相似。

9.政府是否该为母亲的工作提供帮助和资源。

10.国外工作一段时期对个人和国家有何影响。

十、变革类

1.发明什么是你的愿望。

2.改变家乡的一个重要举措。

3.新千年是否符合世界变化的机会和你希望如何变化。

4.人类为什么变得长寿。

十一、环境类

1.如何改进地区公园或国家公园。

2.动物做宠物还是野生动物。

3.是否应该关闭动物园。

4.小轿车是否利大于弊。

5.吸烟是否应该非法化。

6.一个国家和城市的环境保护是应该由个人,团体(公司)和政府来共同承担。

十二、个人看法类

1.拥有土地后如何运用。

2.喜欢亲自动手还是喜欢机器。

3.对独处还是和朋友相处的看法。

4.玩游戏是否一定要赢。

5.安乐死是否会合法化。

6.游客是否应当遵从当地风俗习惯。

7.堕胎应该提倡还是认为是非人道。

8.对现在工作压力大但是闲暇时间非常少有什么看法。

9.名人是否因隐私付出代价及是否应该拥有此权

10.工作需要的转变和自身适应。

雅思写作范文:与外星人沟通

Task:Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send messages to contact them. Others think it is a bad idea because these life forms may be too dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目讲解:

双方观点讨论型,首段可不用明确自身观点,但结尾要明确自身观点。新话题,在联系外星人方面,可从科技、人类生活质量角度详细论述;反对联系外星人方面,可从其性格对人类的影响,以及外星人的意图与未知的能力角度出发,具体阐述。本文自身观点是在人类自身环境安全的情况下,可以试图寻找外星人,但无法确保人类生命的情况下,最好不要联系打扰外星人的生活。

Sample answer:

With advancement of societal technology, certain scientists work for looking for other intelligent life forms who may not exist on the earth such as aliens. While some people argue that contacting with them is likely to bring danger to human. Therefore, the essay aims to critically discuss both views and come up with my own opinion.

That a number of researchers try to find other planets’ living species has to be admitted that pursing that curiosity is one of mankind’s nature. Additionally, by exchanging ideas with aliens about historical progression and academic discussion and so on, mankind’s world has the opportunity to make immense progress in modern technology by giving inspirations to scientists for pushing the frontiers of science which may solve particular thorny issues such as environmental pollution. On the other hand, as far as some researchers are concerned, it lays a solid foundation for people to possess an improved quality of life who live on other planets in order to avoid diseases and disasters brought by serve atmosphere pollution and doomsday respectively.

While, simultaneously, others claim that touching with aliens probably breaks seemingly peaceful earth and brings unexpected danger. Firstly, it is likely that being greedy, exploitative and violent, aliens are searching for somewhere to harvest for water, minerals and fuel, contributing to meeting unprecedented risk by telling them the man’s existence. Furthermore, people know nothing of extraterrestrial intelligence intentions and capabilities so it is impossible to predict whether they will be benign or hostile. For example, earthlings will may be slaughtered and enslaved as colonized countries in the past time.

From a personal perspective, earthlings can try to search for other unique life forms in various planets, but without promising to guarantee human’s lives, it would not better send messages to aliens and disturb their daily lives.

(300 words)

雅思写作范文:网络使我们失去交流能力

Task:More people are using mobile phones and computers to communicate. Therefore, people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer:

Now you are benefiting from the use of mobile phone and the Internet as social interaction media, could you imagine what your daily lives would be without these inventions? Some people claim that individuals are gradually losing face-to-face communication skills. Nevertheless, from personal perspective, online communication cannot make people lose the ability of offline communication.

Apparently, excessive use of the Internet and mobile phones has been undermining our interpersonal relationship offline. Even during a face-to-face conversation, it is no rare thing that everyone is busy looking at his cell phones, neglecting his friends or families across the dinner table. In addition, it has become incredibly easy to contact each other electronically and share information instantly in social community. Gone are the days when people could only communicate via fixed telephone or writing letters which took several days to reach others. So no one is not crazy about smart phones and computers which boast cutting-edge functions like sharing photos and videos with more friends simultaneously.

In spite of the popularity of technological progress mentioned above, never should we turn a blind eye to the irreplaceablity of face-to-face communication. It is common that many schools impart knowledge to students by teaching in classrooms instead of distance education. The same is true of the cooperation among companies, which needs face to face conversation to acquire trust with each other in advance. Furthermore, although online contact may possess increasing numbers of friends, the permanence of mutual relationships cannot lack face-to-face interactions, which can be confirmed by the example of the closest friends and even loving couples. Besides, solving tricky issues are generally more effective and more convenient by surrounding colleagues or friends then by those who live and work in remote places and need online communication.

As far as social interaction is concerned, although the cell phone and the Internet have updated the lives of the current generation. People cannot forget how to make offline communication with each other.

(325 words)

雅思写作范文:科技提高食品质量

Task:

It is known to all that the technological and scientific advances have made greater changes to the range and quality of our food. Some people regard it as an improvement while others believe that the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

随着科学技术的进步,食品的种类,质量都有了提高。有人认为这种现象是好的,也有人觉得这样是有害的。讨论双方观点,并给出你的意见。

Sample answer:

When it comes to the issue about how to judge the use of technologies on food, some people may argue that it contributes to a wider range of available food with better quality for human beings, but others believe that such advances may bring detriments to people’s health.

On one hand, thanks to the modern technologies, human beings are potent to enjoy a wider range of food than before. In the past, people could only enjoy some specific food in specific seasons, such as watermelon in summer. However, with the development of modern technologies, such as the green house, it is also available for individuals to enjoy watermelon in any season they like. Thus, the range of food has been exactly enlarged a lot due to the technological progress.

On the other hand, some potential risks may also exist with the utilization of technologies. It is acknowledged that scientists are eager to explore the mystery of transgene technologies and have adopted some technologies on food. However, the public may be fearful of such new product and even parade to resist transgene food since they cannot know whether some ingredients, after being altered by scientists, would do harm to their health. Considering the short history of transgene food, it is also understandable that human beings are reluctant to accept this new technology.

From my own perspective, it may be inevitable for human beings to adopt some scientific technologies to improve the range and quality of food, especially with the hybrid rice largely alleviating the famine worldwide. However, the possibility of negative consequences caused by it may not be ignored, either. Governments and scientists should be more responsible for their behavior and more scientific researches should be carried out to guarantee that the side effect of new food should be minimal. After all, what human beings intend through technologies on food is a better life, but not death.

(316 words)

篇14:雅思大小作文写作题型分类

流程图

地图题

饼图

曲线图

混合图

柱状图

表格图

雅思大作文6大题型(按文章逻辑分)

1.for&against,或者是advantage&disadvantage

支持反对类型/有点缺点类型

2.discussion

讨论型

3.to what extent do you agree or disagree

你对某观点的赞成/反对程度

4.cause&effect

问题产生原因和影响

5.problem&solution

问题说明和解决方案

6.compare&contrast

两种观点比较

雅思大作文12大题型(按文章主题分)

一、教育类

A.理论与实践

1.知识和经验的重要性。

2.为什么要上大学。

3.大学理论知识和实践课程的关系。

4.高中毕业的学生是否应该在去大学前要工作或旅游一年

5.高中生评估和挑战老师,会不会没有尊重没有纪律性。

6.成功人士所需素质是不是必须从大学或相似的科研学术机构中去学习。

B.男女生问题

7.大学专业招收的学生男女比例是否应该协调。

8.男女分校的利弊。

二、体育活动类:

1.学生花时间练习体育运动的利与弊/该不该。

2.体育活动造成竞争而非合作的是否应该提倡。

3.体育盛事是否有利于缓解世界紧张局势可以维护世界和平。

三、语言类

1.如何说服他人学习自己母语。

2.英语流行的利弊。

3.机器翻译的发展是否导致不必学外语。

4.英语和国际旅游业的流行会不会导致小语种和小民族的伤害。

四、新闻广告类

1.人们是否只应阅读真实事件或人物。

2.新闻的真实性和好的工作者的素质有关系吗。

3.广告的利与弊。

五、青少年成长类

1.学生变异行为或态度的原因和改善。

2.家庭小孩的惩罚教育是否有效。

3.学生压力是否很大。

4.父母是否应该限制小孩看电视玩游戏而应该看书学习。

5.儿童的性格来自先天还是后天培养。

6 儿童要学会竞争还是学习合作。

7 课余参加有偿劳动是否可以提倡。

六、老年人类

1.我们这一辈人和上辈人区别的重要方式。

2.公司55岁的老人是否应该退休把位置让给年青人。

3.年青人比老年人社会地位高的原因和怎么改善。

七、科技与传统类

1.电脑电视录相等是否替代书籍成为传媒和教育的工具。

2.电脑的普及是否会取代老师的对学生的教育。

3.建立博物馆的目的和手段有哪些。

4.网络的普及影响到生活中家庭成员或是朋友之间的亲密关系。

5.科学技术的发展有多少潜在的危机呢。

6.技术发展是否影响娱乐习惯从而减少创造力。

7 生命工程中的器官移植和试管婴儿等是否符合人道。

八、金钱类

1.人类登月类似研究浪费金钱和时间么。

2.医生应以救人为主,不论病人之贫和利益。

3.向朋友借钱会否影响友谊及其原因。

4.花钱买东西或用东西交换的各自好处你喜欢哪种?

5.体育专业的费用是否应该应该比其它重要专业的费用多。

九、国家政府类

1.政府是否应该重视传统和艺术。

2.发展中国家是应该致力于发展本国的科技研究还是去发展人文教育呢。

3.政府花钱在艺术上还是其他事情上。

4.政府财政支持在科学上还是语言商业上。

5.你的国家城乡差距大的原因和解决。

6.电影教给你其他国家的哪些概况

7.富国是否应该帮助穷国。

8.你的国家和其他地方有何相似,如何相似。

9.政府是否该为母亲的工作提供帮助和资源。

10.国外工作一段时期对个人和国家有何影响。

十、变革类

1.发明什么是你的愿望。

2.改变家乡的一个重要举措。

3.新千年是否符合世界变化的机会和你希望如何变化。

4.人类为什么变得长寿。

十一、环境类

1.如何改进地区公园或国家公园。

2.动物做宠物还是野生动物。

3.是否应该关闭动物园。

4.小轿车是否利大于弊。

5.吸烟是否应该非法化。

6.一个国家和城市的环境保护是应该由个人,团体(公司)和政府来共同承担。

十二、个人看法类

1.拥有土地后如何运用。

2.喜欢亲自动手还是喜欢机器。

3.对独处还是和朋友相处的看法。

4.玩游戏是否一定要赢。

5.安乐死是否会合法化。

6.游客是否应当遵从当地风俗习惯。

7.堕胎应该提倡还是认为是非人道。

8.对现在工作压力大但是闲暇时间非常少有什么看法。

9.名人是否因隐私付出代价及是否应该拥有此权

10.工作需要的转变和自身适应。

雅思写作高分四大障碍

障碍一:轻视小作文。

由于小作文占作文分数的三分之一,大作文占三分之二(part2 carries more weight than part one),很多学生都高度重视大作文,却忽视了小作文的重要性。有些同学平时几乎很少练习小作文(即图表作文),在考场上20分钟内往往写不完,结果挤占了大作文的写作时间。

障碍二:过于依赖作文模板。

小编发现,照搬模板的同学写作分数基本上都在5-5.5分之间,从没上过6分。也有一些学生分数上6的,他们的共同特点是没用模板,自己写,。所以如果希望分数在6分以上的话,最好远离模板,自己原创。

障碍三:未写完或偏题。

一些学生由于考试的时候没有控制好时间,作文没有写完就交卷了。这主要体现在两个方面:

第一、字数明显不够。

第二、没有完整的结尾段。

还有一些学生写着写着,一不小心就偏题,甚至跑题。因此要想取得保底的5分,首先要确保按时写完,而且不能偏题或跑题。

障碍四:思路窄,论证不够充分。

思路窄是很多学生写作时的常见问题。由于现在雅思考生呈现出低龄化现象,这部分考生人生阅历浅,对各种社会问题缺乏认识。在考试中,他们普遍面临对问题本身没有太多了解,甚至用中文都感觉无话可说。另一方面,有些同学光有分论点,却没有能够对论点进行有效的论证。这些都导致其作文分数不高。同学们在备考雅思写作的时候,应该注意拓宽思路,多关注新闻和各类社会问题,多积累论点和论据。

雅思写作如何保持连贯性和一致性

连贯性(coherence)

连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面,前者指的是内在的逻辑性,后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连,句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系;反之,只有意连而没有形连,有时行文就不够流畅。

1)意连

段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序,不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思,边写边想,写写停停,那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。

A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement)

We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours ----- it must have been close to noon ---- the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was four o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.

本段从“rose”(起床)写起,然后是吃早餐(“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”),然后是“close to noon”,一直写到这一天结束(“By nine--”)。

B.按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)。例如:From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.

本段的写法是由远及近,从远处(“from a distance”)写起,然后“get closer”,再到(“ ten feet away”),最后是“inside the pagoda”……当然,按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要,也可以由近及远,由表及里等等。

C.按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement)

a.按重要性顺序排列(arrangement insgroupsof importance)

If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.

这一段谈的是表达能力,它的重要性与职业,身份有关,从“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”,最后是“most important”。

b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)

If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A ---- the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that “sanguine” and “sanguinary” mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.

这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness,先给出一个general statement作为主题句,然后通过5个“perhaps”加以例证。

c.由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)

I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.

本段的主题句是段首句,它仅提出一个问题:为什么两只猫会被搞混。然后对两者进行比较,末句才下结论。

2)形连

行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语:

Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies --- in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, during his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate on schedule. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.

本文中起承上启下的词语有两种,一种是转换词语(transitional words or phrases),另一种是起转换作用的其他连接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有:first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.后者依次是:he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his.本段1有词汇105个,所使用的转换词语及其他连接用语共26个词,约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见,掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流畅(smoothness)有益,而且对于学生在规定时间内写足所要求的字数也是不无好处的。

一个段落里如果没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.我们看下面一个例子:

Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.

本段中除了第6句开头出现一个起过渡作用的“it”之外,没有使用其他的过渡词语.这样,文中出现许多重复的词语,全段读起来也显得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的过渡词语来修饰的话,这一段就成了下面一个流畅连贯的段落:

Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.

有损连贯性的几种情况:

考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误:

1)不必要的改变时态,比如:

In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.

2)不必要的改变单复数,比如:

Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.

3)不必要的改变人称,比如:

Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.

因此写作中,一定要注意时态,人称以及数的变化是否正确,要注意保持一致。

雅思写作

篇15:雅思写作话题分类与高分表达

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts.

Model Answer:

Some people think that fiction books have no use at all. They claim that people should read about real events that took place, real people, and established facts. I have to totally disagree with this statement. From my everyday experience and observation I can stand that fiction, miracles and fairy tails are required in our life. For several reasons, which I will mention below, I believe that fiction books play an essential role in our life.

First of all, it is kind of difficult to imagine a six year old child reading about politics or history with the real facts that are not always pleasant. I think that children need miracles and Santa Claus because the real world is too complicated for them. They are too innocent and inexperienced to know the real facts and understand what a real life is about. In addition, I am sure that making a child read only non-fiction books can result in shock.

Second of all, following this statement about refusing from reading books about fiction events we also should refuse from festivals, parades, and celebration such holidays as Halloween because most of the characters there are fictional. Moreover, comic books will disappear as well as animated films and fiction movies. The disadvantage of non-fiction lies in the facts that nothing happens to excite the mind and spirit. From the other side, fiction provides a great slope for a mind to think creatively.

In conclusion, I think that people need miracles. We can not be satisfied with only naked truth. Human kind must believe in something and this belief helps people break limits and make new inventions.

雅思写作

篇16:雅思写作题型的分类方法和题目举例

Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks.

Which do you prefer?

Model Answer:

Form my everyday experience and observation I think that all people who succeeded in life had to work hard and gain more knowledge and experience in order to reach their goals. From the other hand, people who all their life do things they already do well and do not improve their knowledge do not move forward. I base my statement on the following points.

First of all, people who want to succeed must constantly improve their knowledge and gain more experience. Moreover, they must be the best at their profession. So, they need to try new things, take risks sometimes and work hard.

Second of all, it is impossible to live without trying new things. Imagine one wants to learn how to drive. He will never be able to do it without learning new things such as driving rules.

Personally, I think that it is very interesting to learn new, to gain more experience, to make new goals and reach them. Life is too short to stay on one place. People need changes because they make our lives more beautiful and exiting. We find out new things, learn new things and dream to know other things. People need challenges because while overcoming obstacles we make new discoveries, become stronger, perfect ourselves and move forward.

To sum up, I believe that people's aspiration for learning new things is the main reason the way we live now. People make many discoveries and inventions that make our lives easier, happier and longer.

篇17:雅思写作

雅思写作中的保证词组啦,用上它不用怕写作分会低于6月。

1 随着经济的快速发展 with the rapid development of economy

2 提高人民的生活水平improve people’s living standard

3 先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

4 面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges

5 人们普遍认为 it is commonly believed/ recognized that …

6 社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development

7 引起了广泛的公共关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention

8 不可否认 it is undeniable that…/ there is no denying that

9 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate

10 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue

11 完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

12 一些人….而另一些人… some people … while others …

13 就我而言/ 就个人而言 as far as I am concerned/ personally

14 就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on …

15 有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

16 双方的论点 argument on both sides

17 发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in

18 对…必不可少 be indispensable to

19 正如言语所说 as the proverb goes

20 … 也不例外 …. be no exception

21 对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on …

22 利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages

23 导致,引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in

24 复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

25 责任感/成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement

26 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation

27 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision

28 学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29 经济/ 心理负担 financial burden/ psychological burden

30 考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration

31 从另一个角度 from another perspective

32 做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33 对… 有益 be beneficial/ conductive to ….

34 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society

35 打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for ….

36 综合素质 comprehensive quality

37 无可非议 blameless/ beyond reproach

38 无法想象 beyond imagination/ unimaginable

39 致力于/ 投身于 be committed/ devoted to ….

40 应当承认 admittedly

41 不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty

42 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of ….

43 可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44 宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

45 网络 the Internet

46 方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47 在人类生活的方面面 in all aspects of human life

48 环保的 environmentally friendly

49 社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress

50 科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology

51 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

52 支持前/ 后种观点的人 people/ those in favor of the former/ latter opinion

53 有/提供如下理由/证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence

54 在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree/ in some way

55 理论与实践相结合 integrate theory with practice

56 …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of ….

57 日益激烈的社会竞争 an increasingly fierce social competition

58 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

59 长远利益 interest in the long run

60 …有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

61 扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

62 取其精髓,去其糟粕 take the essence and discard the dregs

63 对…有害 do harm to/ be harmful to/ be detrimental to

64 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

65 跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with/ catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …

66 采取有效措施来…. Take effective measures to do sth

67 …的健康发展 the healthy development of ….

68 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides. No garden without weeds.

69 对…观点因人而异 Views on… vary from person to person

70 重视 attach great importance to ….

71 社会地位 social status

72 把时间和经历放在…上 focus time and energy on …

73 扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge

74 身心两方面 both physically and mentally

75 有直接/间接关系 be directly/ indirectly related to ….

76 提出折中建议 set forth a compromise proposal

77 可取代think的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that

78 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden

79 优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth

80 与…比较 compared with …/ in comparison with

81 相反 in/ by contrast; on the contrary

82 代替 replace/ substitute/ take the place of

83 经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis

84 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities

85 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress

86 毫无疑问 undoubtedly/ there is no doubt that

87 增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding

88 充分利用 make full use of/ make the most use of

89 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure

90 保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society

91 更多地强调 put more emphasis on….

92 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society

93 实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true

94 主要的理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:

95 首先 at first, firstly, to begin with

96 其次 secondly, in the second place

97 再次 besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore

98 最后 finally, last but not the least, above all, lastly

99 总而言之 all in all, to sum up, in summary, in a word

100 我们还有很长的路要走 we still have a long way to go

篇18:雅思写作

Random Thoughts on the Window

钱钟书

By Qian Zhongshu

又是春天,窗子可以常开了。春天从窗外进来,人在屋子里坐不住,就从门里出去。

It is spring again and the window can be left open as often as one would like. As spring comes in through the windows, so people -- unable to bear staying inside any longer -- go outdoors.

不过屋子外的春天太贱了!到处是阳光,不像射破屋里阴深的那样明亮;到处是给太阳晒得懒洋洋的风,不像搅动屋里沉闷的那样有生气。

The spring outside, however, is much too cheap, for the sun shines on everything, and so does not seem as bright as that which shoots into the darkness of the house. Outside the sun-sloshed breeze blows everywhere, but it is not so lively as that which stirs the gloominess inside the house.

就是鸟语,也似乎琐碎而单薄,需要屋里的寂静来做衬托。我们因此明白,春天是该镶嵌在窗子里看的,好比画配了框子。

Even the chirping of the birds sounds so thin and broken that the quietness of the house is needed to set it off. It seems that spring was always meant to be put behind a windowpane for show, just like a picture in a frame.

同时,我们悟到,门和窗有不同的意义。当然,门是造了让人出进的。但是,窗子有时也可作为进出口用,譬如小偷或小说里私约的情人就喜欢爬窗子。

At the same time it also becomes clear that the door has a different significance from the window. Of course, doors were made for people to pass through; but a window can also sometimes serve as an entrance or as an exit, and is used as such by thieves and by lovers in novels.

所以窗子和门的根本分别,决不仅是有没有人进来出去。若据赏春一事来看,我们不妨这样说:有了门,我们可以出去;有了窗,我们可以不必出去。

In fact the fundamental difference between a door and a window has nothing to do with them being either entrances or exits. When it comes to the admiration of spring, it could be put this way: a door makes it possible for one to go out, whereas a window makes it possible for one not to have to.

窗子打通了大自然和人的隔膜,把风和太阳逗引进来,使屋子里也关着一部分春天,让我们安坐了享受,无需再到外面去找。

A window helps to pull down the partition between man and nature. It leads breezes and sunlight in, and keeps part of the spring in the house. It allows one to sit and enjoy the spring in peace, and makes it unnecessary to go looking for it outside.

篇19:雅思写作

Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldnt. Which do you think is good practice.

One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.

Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.

Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.

Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.

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